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The asphalt imbedded
Into my melody
Chorusing from in to out

He was continual
I was contrasting
A fight for the spotlight

With tempo of abundance
Sweet tire song humming
I sang of nothing but endurance

Delicate tender stroke of the handle
Rushing wind of the asphalt song
Whirling of the soprano

As my melody rested
The asphalt sang baritone
In a thud, it now leaves a mark

The audience witness
A moment in flat
A shrill of pain

A split of divine
The tune it sang
Came to an end

My head split with a beautiful parting gift
Pebbles of quiet but lasting memory
Sweet songs of pain.
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This is for :iconconcreteteeth:

Prompt = [link] what I feel should be the group's theme song or the simple word "Asphalt" by :icontwistedanger:
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*lcipher42 Aug 25, 2011  Professional General Artist
Excellent.
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~IamA3Dpuzzle Aug 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
LOVE IT!! its amazing and unique keep up the AMAZING work!!!=D
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:iconmisplacedfox:
thank you glad you liked it :) I channeled an old injury of mine :)
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~IamA3Dpuzzle Aug 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
cool....welcome
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Mood: Love ~CrystalTearz55 Aug 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
truly unique and pretty.... very nice ^_^
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:iconmisplacedfox:
thank you very much!
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*AlterEgo1629 Aug 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
This is fantastic!
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:iconmisplacedfox:
Thank you very much! lad you like it :)
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