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I no longer am naïve,
even when you deceive.

I no longer crumple on the floor,
when you walk in the door.

I no longer flinch,
from your loving clinch.

I no longer cower at the raise hand,
even when you demand.

I no longer need to feel
as you continue to steal.

I no longer need to feel the blade,
as it performs a skin raid.

I no longer feel your whirl,
For I am not your little girl!
:iconmisplacedfox:
This just came to me tonight...

Hit me like a freight train into a car, explosions in my head with these quick thoughts of sentences.

I am leer about the impact of it.
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~IamA3Dpuzzle Aug 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
love it
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:iconmisplacedfox:
thank you sweetness :)
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~IamA3Dpuzzle Aug 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
welcome!!
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:icondarkfallenangel21:
I like it! Especially the ending. It gives it a strong feeling of independence!
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~NeverFallAsleep Jun 17, 2011  Student Writer
How I feel exactly
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:iconmisplacedfox:
we can share that then ... its a hard feeling to bear at times
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