literature

Me to You

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My heart rests upon the spear of your desire.

My body aches from the daggers of your touch.

My nerves rise to hear your thoughtless words.

Comatose with ignorance, I give me to you!
it was odding typing this up ...
not much focus from me
but after I read it- I like it.

Feedback would be awesome, it is simple yet questionable.
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Tantio's avatar
It's nice and simple.
Dangerous love