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Fingers are bleeding~
splattering smells of iron and nickel.

Breathing erratic~
sharp and painful in my vanishing chest.

Heart rapidly pounding~
hard against the decaying bones.

Fingers harbor slivers of wood~
a suffocating lid unwilling to break.

Breathing slowing~
air is stale and sour of my soils.

Heart sputtering~
rupturing amongst the void of me.

Fingers numbing from constantly raking~
of an endless battle landing defeat on lifeless limbs.

Breathing unsuccessful~
the grand design starving in slavery of oxygen.

Heart is..............
:iconmisplacedfox:
this is how I feel lately...

on a writer's level- I feel something is a miss
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:iconsolaceinsilence:
i totally forgot that i had read this...it's still good :) lo
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:iconmisplacedfox:
lol... no worries mate, its all good... glad you read it and found it good...I was suffocating that day
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~FadingAqueous Apr 1, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Even if something feels amiss, it is still a great poem. Good work ^^
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:iconmisplacedfox:
*curtsy* Thank you!
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