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You say "Jump!"
         I reply "How high?"
You say "Fly!"
        I reply "I'll try."
You say "Stay"
        I reply "Forever here."
You say "Love."
        I reply "I do!"
I ask "My worth to you?"
        You reply "2.5 percent."

Come Anger,
           Come Fury,
                     Come Rage,

My three headed dragon all in a bloom,
          nipping at your heels as you walk away from my fume.

The turbulence of wrath leaving a bitter taste in the air,
          as I clutched to a lock of your hair.

2.5% I repeat,
          my voodoo will start at your feet.

One part by one part you shall shrink
          until you are small enough to drink.
:iconmisplacedfox:
written during a meal ...
let me know what you think...
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~im4ger360 Jul 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
The overall structure and body of the poem is quite appealing. I love the last few lines and I get the 'summoning' part ...but, What were you eating?
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:iconmisplacedfox:
honestly I don't remember I was at work probably a burger
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:icongothic11shadow:
I am struggling to find the right word for this.... USAGE????

Well overall I think this is perfect and I know what the fury is all about... :)

Amazing work my friend, I love it.
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:iconmisplacedfox:
thank darlin'!
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:icongothic11shadow:
Pleasure dear.... :D
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